Revision: Problem Statements, Alternative Solutions, and Recommendation

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Business Finance

Hi, I got the feedback for the Recommendation section you did in the previous assignment and I attached your original answers. Clearly you have to rewrite the section. Please remember Facebook has already established several apps on mobile devices such as the “Facebook”, “Messenger”, and “Instagram”. You can find and use these apps on iPhones or Android devices. Plus, you need to remove the generic parts in the Recommendation section since they are not relevant enough. This time, you can either stick with the “Installation of revenue-generating mobile applications” as the Recommendation, or you can choose a new one from one of the Alternative Solutions you wrote: “Provide accessibility to rural areas” and “Protection of privacy”. Based on the recent Cambridge Analytica news that Facebook has just encountered, I would suggest “Protection of privacy”. This time, please remember you do not need to write the generic parts such as the five functional departments. I guess this is my fault because I did not estimate the page limit properly when I gave you the assignment. This time, for the Recommendation section, the length you need to write is one page or a little bit less, single-spaced. And please remember for this new Recommendation section, you need to be very specific and you have to relate it to Facebook itself. Please avoid the generic parts.

Plus, for other parts of the paper, please consider your wording a little bit. Some of them needs to be more precise. For example, “Installation of revenue-generating mobile applications”, do you mean put more focus on the mobile platform? And other minor issues could be like the word “rural areas” , you may need to change it as some people may believe it is a bit offensive.

Please upload your rewrited Recommendation Section and revised Problemstatements and Alternative Solutions when you finish.

Thank you!